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PseudoKiller
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Tuffgong4 said:I think the pic for liquidram is good I just see some tweaking from an artist stand point and from an advertising marketing standpoint
the artwork is good just the colors clash more than they go together...maybe a more subtle orange with a greenish hue could blend better with the nice background you have
also from the ad marketing side the overall look of the ad looks like 3 separate pieces more than one solid piece...what I mean is that the main (Liquidram) looks separate from the statement(Bring it don't sing it) and both look distant from the background...
I think finding a font for both text parts that are closer in design would flow better to the eyes and making the fonts sizes that aren't as close would show more strength in the presentation...
I know it may sound like a lot but since you are as good at graphics as you are I think you will know what I mean...
I would like to see the other examples if possible...
I understand what you mean ... but he doesnt make money off this and its only for his LAN Parties and such. He is happy with it and that matters more than the artistic side of it. Believe me, I prefer to do it right but he is buying the Bawls so he is the one who needs to like it.