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LordOfLA

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LordOfLa: He is just trying to help out man. If you are such a master of the English language, it doesn't make sense to me why you are asking for help then.
First, repeating bad english to me after I're repeatedly said it was wrong isn't helping.

Second, I have a stronger grasp of english and grammar than alot of people on here it seems.

Third, if I was perfect I wouldn't be asking for help.

Fourth, sales fluff isn't my stong point.

I'm open to all the help people want to offer. Telling me my grammatically correct english is wrong is plain stupid. Telling me my gramattically wrong english is wrong is helpful.

Additionally have is past tense. Since I'm talking about past experiance as well as current experiance, the sentence as is now is perfect.

When offering advice on grammtical structurem be sure what you are suggesting isn't wrong.
 

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If there is another post within this thread that is slinging mud at anyone at all, the thread will be locked. A formal warning was posted, that should be it.

If anyone is offended by anything, take it up with the other person via PM, or message a community leader to deal with it. Please don't insult eachother within a thread, it makes everyone involved look foolish and it's counter productive.
 

madmatt

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Professionally speaking... "Spring for a dedicated server and have the whole machine to yourself!" does not sound right.

"Sign up for a dedicated server and have the whole machine to yourself!"

I am huge on consistency. I love your quote: "Space. Power. Simplicity." You have it right in the <TITLE> but not in your logo. You forgot the "." at the end of "Simplicity".

Other than that I think it is a great start.
I'll post again, it likely got lost...
 

Brad

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"experience" is spelled incorrectly.
 

Geffy

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Instead of just adding spaces between the letters of your headers use CSS to change the kerning I think it is or might be called letter-spacing.

Actually heres a stab
Space!
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Power!
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Simplicity!
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Wasnt overly sure what you were trying to get at with the space thing. What sort of clients are you expecting to want the Space type of package?
 

LordOfLA

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Didn't know you could change the letter spacing with css. Shall have to look into that, would help those with screenreaders.

The headers were more to utilise the slogan in the main page.

I'm aiming at clients that are a bit more experianced in the hosting game than most, who would rather have one base package that they can then adapt as needed with the host, maybe paying more, maybe paying less as needed.

Thanks Brad for pointing out experience, I can never spell that right firt time around.

I'll implement some of these suggestions and post again once I'm ready for more :)
 

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