PseudoKiller said:
...many of the sentences in you *doc files are run on and or fragmented. There are some spelling mistakes too. Also any titles of books, papers, pamphlets or any published works need to be underlined. You have many commas that arent needed.
Now the flash stuff... very interesting and definately stands out but the red text over a semi white background makes it very hard to read. Sorry for all the comments but I thought you should know since this is going to a college.
wow...I
really appreciate you actually reading into it (literally) that much, many thanks. As for the commmas - not surprised you say something about that, but Im not really worried, its more of a pace-oration style... had a few teachers ask about that before, takes some explaining, but reading with a specific flow, the commas dont seem so unnecessary, but otherwise - yeah, it looks like I'm nuts (this particular college has already talked with me about it anyway...artsy super-liberal hippie commune utopia, etc etc
) spelling and formatting mistakes Im sure are abound (took everything from .doc, and dropped in html...dumbass me for not editing enough, thanks for heads up on that) Ill keep hunting for those until the college replies, so...yeah, thank you very much for your suggestions again
PS - with those shades in your avatar... you look like one of my relatives on steroids ready to beat the crap out of me... lol, scary
