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March 12th, 2003

Hey everyone!

My friend has just designed a site for his squash club and i just wanted your opinions and suggestions on anyhting thats wrong with it.

http://www.mwhite.karoo.net/

I personally think that he needs a consistant menu system throughout the site, and he shud lose all them fancy effects on page enter n exit, n a few other things. What do you think?

Thanks

Jason

**Geffy** · March 12th, 2003

the ideas there, but yeah get rid of all the text slide effects, they just get annoying and you will loose visitors, as they might not want to return

March 12th, 2003

is this evidence to prove to your mate hes a total failure. what id like change is the pictures are blurry and dull they need a seesion in the photoshop:blink: and them flyiin/out effects are dodgy get rid of them for somein like a fade in or out thatll be less scarey when it transitions

March 12th, 2003

Well yeh, i don't really like the site too much, n i told him what i thought was wrong and could be improved, but he wouldn't listen, so i decided that he might listen to other people and make some changes so i asked you guys. Anything else you thinks wrong wiv it?

**Friend of Bill** · March 12th, 2003

He should have a link to the "Squash Club House."...

March 12th, 2003

Originally posted by SnookBooger
He should have a link to the "Squash Club House."...

Whats "Squash Club house"? A website? if so ill pass the link on if you have the address.

**Friend of Bill** · March 12th, 2003

No. He should make a page known as the "Squash Club House" and have a link to it from the front page. He can post/discuss anything he wants in it. Sorta a hang-out for squash players...

March 12th, 2003

you mean like a forum availble to members only or sumthing like that, thats a goodd idea, but i dont think his server supports any scripting languages

**Zedric** · March 13th, 2003

Gaaah! Begone! No offence, but that site is horrible. And the coding is pretty scary too.

1. Moving flashy thing. Take it away.
2. Javascript errors as soon as I click anything.
3. Links and motion don't work in Mozilla and Opera because of the way it's coded. That's bad. And pointless.

Sorry for the harsh words, but I wouldn't visit that site more than once. I pretty sure I'm not the only one.

If he fixes the above mistakes I'll take a look at the details, like the menu you mensioned.

**GoNz0** · March 13th, 2003

ya need to keep the pic of this chick no matter what he does to the site.

March 16th, 2003

U pieces of ****ed up **** know jack all about how to design a website. That great squash website by that genious boy has been undermined by you all all and you should be ashamed. As a first attempt it is good and I agree could be improved but don't be such tight *******s and give him a chance.

March 16th, 2003

Originally posted by 3005
U pieces of ****ed up **** know jack all about how to design a website. That great squash website by that genious boy has been undermined by you all all and you should be ashamed. As a first attempt it is good and I agree could be improved but don't be such tight *******s and give him a chance.

You don't seriously believe that is an example good web design do you? We are just giving pointers like the thread starter asked us for. The site doesn't even work in Opera, limiting a fair few users, the photos are crap quality, there are annoying moving thingys across the screen. Yeah, its alright for his first try but we're just giving some pointers. Not a good first post on ntfs 3005.

**Tabula Rasa** · March 16th, 2003

Originally posted by 3005
U pieces of ****ed up **** know jack all about how to design a website. That great squash website by that genious boy has been undermined by you all all and you should be ashamed. As a first attempt it is good and I agree could be improved but don't be such tight *******s and give him a chance.

heh...

March 16th, 2003

Originally posted by GoNz0
ya need to keep the pic of this chick no matter what he does to the site.

phwoar nice ass baby definately keeps this pic :happy:

March 16th, 2003

the geezer has to accept criticism form potential users it happens in everyday life no matter what you do.

so he can either cry himself to sleep every nite or get his finger out of his ass and strart improving. thats how all things are done

**SPeedY_B** · March 16th, 2003

specific critisism is always good and should be accepted.
things like "that ____ on the left is a bit too big, it looks out of place" or whatever is a help. obviously if someone posted "its crap" then that could be taken badly.

All i see in the posts before mine are people legitematly responding to the initial post.

And by the way, 3005 flaming is against the forum rules, please take more care in what you write in your next post.

**Geffy** · March 16th, 2003

hey if he wants to see some of our own work that we have done, then look in our sigs and stuff.

mine
currently not workin in mozilla and opera correctly (workin on that) and the domain isnt sorted out at the mo either, but its the rest of it. Look at it as some of my credentials.

March 12th, 2003	Top \| #1
Jason2k1 Unregistered Posts: n/a	Suggestions Hey everyone! My friend has just designed a site for his squash club and i just wanted your opinions and suggestions on anyhting thats wrong with it. http://www.mwhite.karoo.net/ I personally think that he needs a consistant menu system throughout the site, and he shud lose all them fancy effects on page enter n exit, n a few other things. What do you think? Thanks Jason

March 12th, 2003	Top \| #2
Geffy OSNN Veteran Addict Joined: March 2002 Location: United Kingdom Posts: 7,805 Reputation: 1490 Power: 217	the ideas there, but yeah get rid of all the text slide effects, they just get annoying and you will loose visitors, as they might not want to return  • blog • tumblog • lastfm • flickr • #rubyonrails • @twitter "I could be replaced with a very small shell script"

March 12th, 2003	Top \| #6
Jason2k1 Unregistered Posts: n/a	Originally posted by SnookBooger He should have a link to the "Squash Club House."... Whats "Squash Club house"? A website? if so ill pass the link on if you have the address.

March 13th, 2003	Top \| #9
Zedric NTFS Guru Joined: January 2002 Location: Sweden Posts: 4,006 Reputation: 890 Power: 175	Gaaah! Begone! No offence, but that site is horrible. And the coding is pretty scary too. 1. Moving flashy thing. Take it away. 2. Javascript errors as soon as I click anything. 3. Links and motion don't work in Mozilla and Opera because of the way it's coded. That's bad. And pointless. Sorry for the harsh words, but I wouldn't visit that site more than once. I pretty sure I'm not the only one. If he fixes the above mistakes I'll take a look at the details, like the menu you mensioned. Did I help you? Please use the reputation system. Click the icon on the left! Proud host of the OSNN.net folding sigs. Want one? Check the folding thread! http://zedric.no-ip.com/

March 16th, 2003	Top \| #12
jumpy Unregistered Posts: n/a	Originally posted by 3005 U pieces of **ed up know jack all about how to design a website. That great squash website by that genious boy has been undermined by you all all and you should be ashamed. As a first attempt it is good and I agree could be improved but don't be such tight *****s and give him a chance. You don't seriously believe that is an example good web design do you? We are just giving pointers like the thread starter asked us for. The site doesn't even work in Opera, limiting a fair few users, the photos are crap quality, there are annoying moving thingys across the screen. Yeah, its alright for his first try but we're just giving some pointers. Not a good first post on ntfs 3005.

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March 12th, 2003	Top \| #3
XP Abuser Unregistered Posts: n/a	is this evidence to prove to your mate hes a total failure. what id like change is the pictures are blurry and dull they need a seesion in the photoshop:blink: and them flyiin/out effects are dodgy get rid of them for somein like a fade in or out thatll be less scarey when it transitions

March 12th, 2003	Top \| #4
Jason2k1 Unregistered Posts: n/a	Well yeh, i don't really like the site too much, n i told him what i thought was wrong and could be improved, but he wouldn't listen, so i decided that he might listen to other people and make some changes so i asked you guys. Anything else you thinks wrong wiv it?

March 12th, 2003	Top \| #5
Friend of Bill What, me worry? Joined: April 2002 Posts: 1,572 Reputation: 20 Power: 139	He should have a link to the "Squash Club House."...

March 12th, 2003	Top \| #7
Friend of Bill What, me worry? Joined: April 2002 Posts: 1,572 Reputation: 20 Power: 139	No. He should make a page known as the "Squash Club House" and have a link to it from the front page. He can post/discuss anything he wants in it. Sorta a hang-out for squash players...

March 12th, 2003	Top \| #8
Jason2k1 Unregistered Posts: n/a	you mean like a forum availble to members only or sumthing like that, thats a goodd idea, but i dont think his server supports any scripting languages

March 13th, 2003	Top \| #10
GoNz0 NTFS Stoner Joined: March 2002 Location: the year 2525 Posts: 2,781 Reputation: 350 Power: 155	ya need to keep the pic of this chick no matter what he does to the site.

March 16th, 2003	Top \| #11
3005 Unregistered Posts: n/a	U pieces of **ed up know jack all about how to design a website. That great squash website by that genious boy has been undermined by you all all and you should be ashamed. As a first attempt it is good and I agree could be improved but don't be such tight *****s and give him a chance.

March 16th, 2003	Top \| #13
Tabula Rasa Stranger Than Kindness Joined: July 2002 Location: Israel Posts: 3,233 Reputation: 450 Power: 157	Originally posted by 3005 U pieces of **ed up know jack all about how to design a website. That great squash website by that genious boy has been undermined by you all all and you should be ashamed. As a first attempt it is good and I agree could be improved but don't be such tight *****s and give him a chance. heh...

March 16th, 2003	Top \| #14
XP Abuser Unregistered Posts: n/a	Originally posted by GoNz0 ya need to keep the pic of this chick no matter what he does to the site. phwoar nice ass baby definately keeps this pic :happy:

March 16th, 2003	Top \| #15
XP Abuser Unregistered Posts: n/a	the geezer has to accept criticism form potential users it happens in everyday life no matter what you do. so he can either cry himself to sleep every nite or get his finger out of his ass and strart improving. thats how all things are done

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March 16th, 2003	Top \| #16
SPeedY_B I may actually be insane. Joined: March 2002 Location: Midlands, England Posts: 15,800 Reputation: 2877 Power: 310	specific critisism is always good and should be accepted. things like "that ____ on the left is a bit too big, it looks out of place" or whatever is a help. obviously if someone posted "its crap" then that could be taken badly. All i see in the posts before mine are people legitematly responding to the initial post. And by the way, 3005 flaming is against the forum rules, please take more care in what you write in your next post. 1. SPeedYB.co.uk 2. CamPortal.co.uk 3. MacIRC.co.uk

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Geffy OSNN Veteran Addict Joined: March 2002 Location: United Kingdom Posts: 7,805 Reputation: 1490 Power: 217	hey if he wants to see some of our own work that we have done, then look in our sigs and stuff. mine currently not workin in mozilla and opera correctly (workin on that) and the domain isnt sorted out at the mo either, but its the rest of it. Look at it as some of my credentials.  • blog • tumblog • lastfm • flickr • #rubyonrails • @twitter "I could be replaced with a very small shell script"